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Chapter 2-Final Redemption...

Mon Oct 13, 2008, 9:49 AM
“Tane, wake up please, please wake up” she heard Carth’s voice in the back of her head.
Her eyes fluttered open slowly.
Carth stood over her.
“I…I though I died” Tane rubbed her head.
“I thought you did too. I thought we both would die…but, Mission and Canderous showed up. And they flew us out of there. I didn’t even know Canderous could fly”
Tane was silent.
Carth seen that look on Tane’s face before. That sad, defeated look. “Tane…I forgive you”
Tane’s eyes filled with tears. “How can you? I killed three of my best friends! I almost killed Mission. I almost…killed…you” Tears spilled out of her eyes. “Jolee, Juhani, and Bastilla, they’re all gone!”
Tane looked into Carth’s eyes. Were those tears? Why was he crying?
“Tane, Mission said she forgave you, why else would she and Canderous rescue us?”
“Because they like you, they don’t care about me! They might pity me, but that’s it…They just wanted you alive”
Carth sighed and took a deep breath. “Now look who’s moping.” He smiled.
“I am not…okay, I’m moping. You’re very pushy, you know that?” she returned the smiled. It was the last thing they said to each other before Tane turned to the dark side. Tane’s face grew distant; Carth knew exactly what she was thinking. “Stop it” he said quietly.
Her eyes once again found Carth’s “stop what?”
Carth gave her the ‘you know what’ look.
Tane shook her head and sighed. “I’m tired, Carth”
“Alright, I’ll leave you then” Carth stood up and walked out.
As soon as Carth was out of sight. Tane hopped up and threw the nearest tunic she could find on.
She sat down on her bed and meditated. The nearest exit was…out the door around the corner to the left. That was specific.
She slowly walked to the door and turned the door knob. No one in sight. She tip toed around the corner. Someone was behind her! She put on force speed and ran to the exit. Once she was outside, she walked to a land-speeder, she looked around. There it was. A blaster. She picked it up. And now, she would head back to the hospital.

~`~
Carth walked into Tane’s room. She sat there, hands folded in front of her. “Carth. Come here for a minute” Tane whispered.
Carth walked over and sat on the bed-side chair.
Tane withdrew the blaster. “I...you said that you wanted to put a blaster to Malek and Revan’s head. Here’s your chance” Tane handed Carth the weapon.
His eyes widened. “Tane…You’re not Revan anymore…I would never hurt you.”
Tane’s eyes filled with unshed tears. She let out a sob. “Carth, I’m so sorry”
Carth switched from the chair to the bed and embraced Tane.
They sat like that for twenty minutes.
“I love you, Carth” she mumbled into his shirt
“I love you too, Tane, and I’ll never stop”
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That probably wasn't as good as my last chapter, but it had a better ending, thats for sure. so, hope it made sense.
Please comment!
and be honest, I want to know if I stink at writing!
~Dani

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:iconzedderzulu:
Cheers very much for the fave! :D
Sorry for the slow reply :)
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Thanks for the :+fav: on Mission with a Gizka!
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